Riki Thinks: Research Changes

Well It would seem I have a few things I need to change in my paper.  Need to actually figure out a thesis, which I guess would be a good start.  While I think I have a general Idea of where I am trying to go with it, a general idea is not gonna fly very far.  Also, I think it would help to begin refining my paragraphs so as to spend less time rambling and more time answering the question.  My only concern would be that without my rambling I may not have enough to finish the Four pages... But thats just how it goes I guess.  I can worry about making it to the end when I get my thesis set, because hopefully when I have that taken care of, finishing the paper should fall into place.